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I also prefer Stephen's version. Annie<br><br>
At 01:07 PM 4/5/2006, you wrote:<br>
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find Stephen’s example to be the clearest yet. <br>
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Will.<br>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Stephen Skuce<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, April 05, 2006 12:53 PM<br>
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I think breaking up the long second sentence helps.<br><br>
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<b>0B2. Imperfect copies.</b> In general, base the description on the
copy in hand. If this copy is known to be imperfect, however, and details
of a copy without the imperfection(s) can be determined, base the
description on the copy without the imperfection(s). Use brackets
only where required for description of the perfect copy.<br><br>
Stephen<br>
At 11:57 AM 4/5/2006 -0400, Deborah J. Leslie
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