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<p class="MsoNormal">Proofreading comments for Introduction.<o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The editorial checklist states "use AACR 2" not
"AACR2."
Is this a mistake? I see only the latter in the document. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 9<br>
In contents list, delete extra space preceding "Acronyms."<o:p> </o:p><br>
"Intro 1.1" should be "Intro 1.1." (add
final period).<o:p> <br>
</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 10, Intro 2.1.<br>
Closing parenthesis of ISBD(A) should not be italicized.<br>
<o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 11, Intro 3.1.1.<br>
[The following comment already sent out to DCRM-L.] The
Introduction speaks of users' ability to "distinguish clearly among
different manifestations of an expression or work" (see Intro 3.1.1.
and
following paragraph, and 3.2.2.). I'm not exactly sure what we are
trying to
say here, or how we mean this to be interpreted. In common parlance we
often
speak of a manifestation of a work with the expression implied, but is
it not
physically impossible to have manifestation of a work, without the
expression,
as the sentence suggests? What would be the difference between a
manifestation
of an expression vs. the manifestation of a work? Should the wording be
changed
to "Users are able to distinguish clearly among different
manifestations
of an expression <i>of a</i> work"?<br>
<o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 12, Intro 3.1.2.<br>
"(e.g., consultation from a distance, limited access due
to the fragile condition of the item, inability to physically browse
collections housed in restricted areas)." Insert "or" before
"inability"
or ", etc." following "areas."<br>
<o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 13, Intro 3.2.2.<br>
2nd sentence: "(the title and statement of responsibility
area, the edition area, the publication, distribution, etc., area, and
the
series area)..." Delete comma following "etc."<o:p> <br>
</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p>Page 16, Intro 6. The entire sentence
is italicized. Italicize
the titles only.<o:p> <br>
<br>
</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Page 16, Intro 8.2. In first sentence, "area 7"
should be "Area 7."<br>
Also, the reference "(see 7.A15)" should be "(see
7A1.5)."</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p><br>
Page 18, Intro 9. In last sentence, replace "cataloging
record" with "bibliographic record."<br>
</p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
Best,<br>
Ryan<br>
</p>
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--
Ryan Hildebrand, Special Collections and Archives Cataloger
UCI Libraries, P.O. Box 19557
University of California, Irvine, CA 92623-9557
Telephone: (949) 824-2263 | Fax: (949) 824-2472</pre>
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