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<DIV><FONT size=2>Some of these comments go <SPAN
class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial>a bit </FONT></SPAN>beyond the
proofing request. Ignore if desired. </FONT></DIV>
<P><FONT size=2><SPAN class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial> -
</FONT></SPAN>Jim.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2>p. 111:<BR> - 6A1. Add boldface: "6A1. Prescribed
punctuation"</FONT></P>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial><FONT size=2>p. 113:<BR> - 6A2.<SPAN
class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial>6.</FONT></SPAN> <SPAN
class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial> A</FONT></SPAN>dd under example,
to parallel treatment of 6G2 example<SPAN class=435463719-08092006><FONT
face=Arial> : </FONT></SPAN>"<FONT
face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman>(</FONT><I><FONT
face=PalatinoLinotype-Italic>Editorial comment</I></FONT></FONT><FONT
face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><FONT size=2>: Providing the Mosher information is
optional)"</FONT><SPAN class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial
size=2> ? <BR></FONT></SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=2> - 6B1.
Might 6B1 be taken as contradicting 6A2? If so, perhaps change to: "...according
to the general rules 0B, 0E$B!>(B0G". If not, ignore this comment.<BR> - 6C1.
Delete sentence "<FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman>Precede each parallel series
title by an equals sign." This is redundant of 6A, and no equivalent appears in
the 1C1 rule for parallelism.<SPAN class=435463719-08092006><FONT
face=Arial> </FONT></SPAN></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman size=2><FONT
face=Arial></FONT> </DIV></FONT>
<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><FONT face=Arial>p.
114:</FONT></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><FONT size=2> - 6E1. Move <SPAN
class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial>final </FONT></SPAN>sentence above
example, to parallel treatment in 6G1.1: "However, i<FONT
face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman>f the statement of responsibility is grammatically
inseparable from the series title, see 6B2." </FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT
face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><SPAN
class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial><BR><FONT size=2> - </FONT><FONT
size=2> </FONT></FONT></SPAN><FONT size=2>Also, add a sentence
to <SPAN class=435463719-08092006><FONT face=Arial>6E1
to </FONT></SPAN>echo 4B6.4 to the effect: "Do not also transpose and
transcribe a statement of responsibility if it must be recorded as a
grammatically inseparable part of the series
title." </FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT size=2><FONT face=Arial><SPAN
class=435463719-08092006>? </SPAN></FONT><FONT face=Arial><SPAN
class=435463719-08092006> </SPAN></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman></FONT></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman><FONT face=Arial>p.
115:</FONT></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman>- 6G1.1. To echo 4B6.4, add
"Do not also transpose and transcribe series numbering if it must be recorded as
a grammatically inseparable part of the series title."
? </FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=PalatinoLinotype-Roman>- 6G3.1. Remove boldface:
"If there are parallel series titles (see 6C) and the series numbering also
appears in more than one language or script, transcribe each number after the
series title to which it relates (following any other title information or any
statement of responsibility associated with the title)."</FONT><FONT
face=Arial><SPAN class=435463719-08092006> </SPAN></FONT></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT size=2><FONT face=Arial><SPAN class=435463719-08092006>Finally, a
question: I wonder if App. F should include some mention of series tracing? Not
my section but I'd be happy to try to draft something to pull Area 6 into
App. F if it seems appropriate at this late
date. </SPAN></FONT></FONT></DIV></BODY></HTML>