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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 83,
4D1.1. Delete the space between the first period and the
second 1</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 85,
4D2.5. Last line -- the 12 referring to the footnote should be
superscripted</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 86,
4D2.5. First example under the last paragraph -- should this
be 12/13 September 1750?</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 88,
4D5. Font sizes in the left column are not
consistent</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Some suggestions
about comma placement:</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 69,
4A1. For consistency with the other
paragraphs, I would put a comma between "colon" and "unless" in the 4th and 8th
paragraphs</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg.
71, 5th
line, comma between "importance" and "while?"</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>footnote
11</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Pg. 77,
4B10.2. 2nd line, commas after "Leningrad" and St.
Petersburg?" </FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=622570015-11092006><FONT face=Arial size=2>Other than these few
things, the section looks good, with much fuller explanation of the
rules.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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