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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>Thanks,
Ryan; specific responses below. </span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>By the way,
don</span></font><font size=2 color=blue><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
color:blue'>’</span></font><font size=2 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>t look for
the fixed in the posted version; I am making them to the master draft. </span></font></p>
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<p><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;
font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>__________________________________________</span></font><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> <br>
</span></font><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>Deborah J.
Leslie</span></font><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>, M.A.,
M.L.S.<br>
Chair, RBMS Bibliographic Standards Committee<br>
<a href="http://www.folger.edu/bsc/index.html">http://www.folger.edu/bsc/index.html</a><br>
Head of Cataloging, Folger Shakespeare Library<br>
201 East Capitol St., S.E., Washington, D.C. 20003</span></font><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> <br>
</span></font><font size=1 color=blue face="Arial Unicode MS"><span
style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'>djleslie@folger.edu
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font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";color:blue'><a href="http://www.folger.ed">http://www.folger.ed</a>u</span></font><font
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=2 color=black
face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:windowtext'>-----Original
Message-----<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>From:</span></b> dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu
[mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu] <b><span style='font-weight:bold'>On Behalf
Of </span></b></span></font><font size=2 color=black face=Tahoma><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:windowtext'>Ryan Hildebrand</span></font><font
size=2 color=black face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;
color:windowtext'><br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Sent:</span></b> 08 September 2006 19:10<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>To:</span></b> dcrm-l@lib.byu.edu<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Subject:</span></b> [</span></font><font
size=2 color=black face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;
color:windowtext'>DCRM</span></font><font size=2 color=black face=Tahoma><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:windowtext'>-L] Introduction
comments</span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> </span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Proofreading comments for
Introduction.<u1:p> </span></font></u1:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>The editorial checklist
states "use AACR 2" not "AACR2." Is this a mistake? I see
only the latter in the document. </span></font><u1:p></u1:p><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'>You’re right; the reverse is true. </span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 9<br>
In contents list, delete extra space preceding "Acronyms."<u1:p> <br>
</u1:p>"Intro 1.1" should be "Intro 1.1." (add final
period).<u1:p> </span></font><b><i><font color=blue><span style='color:blue;
font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'>Fixed</span></font><br>
</u1:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 10, Intro 2.1.<br>
Closing parenthesis of ISBD(A) should not be italicized.</span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> Fixed</span></font><br>
<u1:p> </u1:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 11, Intro 3.1.1.<br>
[The following comment already sent out to </span></font>DCRM-L.] The
Introduction speaks of users' ability to "distinguish clearly among
different manifestations of an expression or work" (see Intro 3.1.1. and
following paragraph, and 3.2.2.). I'm not exactly sure what we are trying to
say here, or how we mean this to be interpreted. In common parlance we often
speak of a manifestation of a work with the expression implied, but is it not
physically impossible to have manifestation of a work, without the expression,
as the sentence suggests? What would be the difference between a manifestation
of an expression vs. the manifestation of a work? Should the wording be changed
to "Users are able to distinguish clearly among different manifestations
of an expression <i><span style='font-style:italic'>of a</span></i> work"?<b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> Addressed separately</span></font><br>
<u1:p> </u1:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 12, Intro 3.1.2.<br>
"(e.g., consultation from a distance, limited access due to the fragile
condition of the item, inability to physically browse collections housed in
restricted areas)." Insert "or" before "inability" or
", etc." following "areas."</span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> Ok; chose the latter</span></font><br>
<u1:p> </u1:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 13, Intro 3.2.2.<br>
2nd sentence: "(the title and statement of responsibility area, the
edition area, the publication, distribution, etc., area, and the series
area)..." Delete comma following "etc."<u1:p> </span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'>Fixed</span></font><br>
<br>
</p>
</u1:p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><u1:p></u1:p><font size=3
color=black face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 16,
Intro 6. The entire sentence is italicized. Italicize the titles only.<u1:p> </span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'>Fixed</span></font><br>
<br>
<br>
</p>
</u1:p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Page 16, Intro 8.2. In
first sentence, "area 7" should be "Area 7."<br>
Also, the reference "(see 7.A15)" should be "(see 7A1.5)."</span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'>Both fixed</span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><u1:p><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> <br>
</u1:p>Page 18, Intro 9. In last sentence, replace "cataloging
record" with "bibliographic record."</span></font><b><i><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue;font-weight:bold;font-style:italic'>[DJL] </span></font></i></b><font
color=blue><span style='color:blue'> Fixed</span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><br>
Best,<br>
Ryan</span></font></p>
<pre style='margin-left:.5in' cols=72><font size=2 color=black
face="Courier New"><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span></font></pre><u1:p></u1:p><pre
style='margin-left:.5in'><font size=2 color=black face="Courier New"><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'>-- </span></font></pre><pre style='margin-left:.5in'><font
size=2 color=black face="Courier New"><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Ryan Hildebrand, Special Collections and Archives Cataloger</span></font></pre><pre
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