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size=2>Following are a few additional comments on Area 7. I have
tried not to say what Ryan and Joe have already noted.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B6: "Make notes to
convey the following information:" This instruction seems
unnecessary. Other rules do not have such a statement between the rule
caption and the sub rule, whether or not the sub rule itself has a caption,
e.g., 7B4 or 7B9.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B6.5, 2nd
example: a question: could the example be phrased differently so that
the equal sign is not used? Even in a note, the use of the equal sign
makes me think there is a a parallel title involved. Suggest either to
replace "=" with "is" or to substitute the following: "By Charles
Pigott, the author of The virtues of nature."</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B7.2, immediately
before examples at top of p. 126: suggest delete colon in "'References:'
note." See usage without colon ("'References' note") on p. 119 in
rule 7A1.3 and see my comments below for rule 7B18.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B9.3, 2nd
example: "or" should be left justified so that "Signatures:" is indented
at the same indention as the 1st example.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B9.7, last
example: for "(in Hebrew chracters)" read "(in Hebrew
characters)"</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B18. "With:"
notes. I agree with Ryan's comment, "Page 139, 7B19.3.4 gives the
instruction, 'Preface the note with the words "Bound with" followed by a colon,'
while in 7B18 the colon for 'With:' notes is indicated only implicitly. Should
the instructions be harmonized? I prefer for both intellectual and typographical
clarity the instruction given in 7B19.3.4." I too suggest that rule 7B18
make explicit the instruction to begin the note with the word "With" followed by
a colon. "'With:' notes" is the phrase used as the caption of DCRB
7C19, but the "Bound with" instance in DCRM(B) 7B19.3.4 seems clearer to me and
is supported by similar instructions to begin notes with "Signatures"
(7B9.1) and "References" (7B14.1) and a colon. AACR2 2.7B21 uses
the caption "'With' notes." If the editors agree, then the caption of
7B18 would read "'With' notes" and the first sentence of 7B18.1 could
end "make a note beginning with the word 'With' followed by a colon." Such
wording would take care of the problem Ryan noted about the
final punctuation of the sentence ending with
"With:"</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>7B19.1c: should
"'bound with' notes" be "'Bound with' notes"?</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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class=374402902-20092006><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>I hope these comments
are helpful.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2>Windy</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<P><FONT face="Courier New" size=2>****************<BR>M. Winslow
Lundy<BR>Assistant Professor<BR>Head of Monographic Cataloging<BR>Cataloging
& Metadata Services Department<BR>University of Colorado at Boulder
Libraries<BR>184 UCB<BR>Boulder, CO 80309<BR>phone: 303-492-3918<BR>fax:
303-492-0494<BR>email:
windy.lundy@colorado.edu<BR></FONT></SPAN></P></DIV></BODY></HTML>