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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Thanks, Nina. Comments and a couple of questions below. </FONT></SPAN></P>
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</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">From:</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu [<A HREF="mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu">mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu</A>]</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">On Behalf Of</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">nschneider@nypl.org<BR>
</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Sent:</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">11 September 2006 11:32<BR>
</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">To:</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> dcrm-l@lib.byu.edu<BR>
</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Subject:</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> [DCRM-L] Introduction comments</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Proofreading comments for Introduction.</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Please note: I found some of the same problems and typos that Ryan</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">addressed in an earlier email. I've deleted those from this list.</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Introduction:</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">1. On p. 9: List of contents: Intro 8 should read, "Intro 8. Examples and</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">notes"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">D</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">J</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">F</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">3. On p. 10: "Intro 2.1." and "Intro 2.2." should be on separate line to</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">conform to layout</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yes and no.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">S</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ubsection header</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">get their own lines only when they have a caption. However, I thought it was appropriate to add captions to these two</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">(</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">AA</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">CR2 and ISBD(A)</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> and</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">MARC21</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> respectively)</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">and so yes, they are now on a separate line. </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">4. On p. 13: "Intro 3.2.1. ... distinguish clearly among different</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">manifestations</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> of an expression or work" Cf. Ryan's notes on FRBR terms vs.</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM(B) language.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">fixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5. On p. 15: Reference to rules 4B3-4, 4 B8-12, 4E incorrect</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Why do you think</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">they</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> might be</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">incorrect</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">T</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">hese</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">talk about supplied place names, which for us is in English, but for non-English agencies</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">should prob</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">a</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">bly</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">be in</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">the modern forms of their own language.</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Or am I missing something else?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">8. On p. 17: Reference to "see Intro 7" under "'Optional note'" is</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">incorrect. Perhaps Intro 8.2. ?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Should hav</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">e</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> been</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Intro 4.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Fixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">9. On p. 20: Fourth paragraph, beginning, "Although treatment of</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">headings..." Re. Full-level cataloging: "The name headings need not be</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">established using authority records, although full authority work will</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">generally result in greater consistency of headin</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">gs and improved access."</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">This in contrast to the Core-level which states that headings must be</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">established in the LC/NACO and SACO files</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">S</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">orry Nina, I</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">m missing your point.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Preliminaries:</FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Also: Although we weren't asked to comment upon the preliminary pages, I</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">found a couple of problems</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">:</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">1. Table of Contents needs pagination</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">T</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">he TOC</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">, along with the title page, will be redesigned by the graphic designer</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Plus, w</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">e can</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">t add page numbers until all the editing is done</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">But thanks for the reminder.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">2. The leaf following the ToC [p. 4] is blank. Is this intentional?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yes, all</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">major</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">sections</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">, with the</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">possible</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">exception</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">of Area 3,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">begin on rectos.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">3. On p. 7, with paragraph beginning, "Our thanks go, too, to the</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Folger...", there is mention of images. When will these be added?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">T</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">hey are already there;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">I obtained</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">all the images</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">of characters</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">in area 7 and appendix G</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">from Folger books using</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">a digit</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">al microsc</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ope</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> or a scanner. If there is a graphic on the cover, it will also be from the Folger. (The designer</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">will</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">present several possible designs, only one of which (I believe) will have a graphic,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">which will be one or more</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">of the two dozen</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">printers</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> marks</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> I scanned</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">)</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Do I need to be more explicit about the kind of images I mean?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">4. On p. 7, bot</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">tom line and continuing to first two lines of p. 8: the</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">names are italicized and out of sequence.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJ</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">L</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yup.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">T</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">he</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">italicized out-of-sequence names are of those people who volunteered to proofread; I</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">un-italicize them and</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">add</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">to</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">the</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">correct sequence when they</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">send in their comments.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Nina Schneider</FONT></SPAN></P>
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