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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Thanks, Windy. More below.</FONT></SPAN></P>
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</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Deborah J. Leslie, M.A., M.L.S.<BR>
Chair, RBMS Bibliographic Standards Committee<BR>
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</SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Head of Cataloging, Folger Shakespeare Library<BR>
</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">201 East Capitol St., S.E.,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Washington,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">D.C.</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">20003<BR>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">-----Original Message-----<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">From:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu [<A HREF="mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu">mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu</A>]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">On Behalf Of</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Windy Lundy<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Sent:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">20 September 2006</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">00:47<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">To:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">'</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM Revision Group List'<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Subject:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> RE: [</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM-L] Area 7 comments</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">Following are a few additional comments on Area 7. I have tried not to say what Ryan and Joe have already noted.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">7B6: "Make notes to convey the fol</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">lowing information:" This instruction seems unnecessary. Other rules do not have such a statement between the rule caption and the sub rule, whether or not the sub rule itself has a caption, e.g., 7B4 or 7B9.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> I agree. Deleted.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">7B6.5, 2nd example:</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000"> </FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"> a question: could the example be phrased differently so that the equal sign is not used? Even in a note, the use of the equal sign makes me think there is a a parallel title involved. Suggest either to replace "=" with "is" or to substitute the followi</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ng: "By Charles Pigott, the author of The virtues of nature."</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Changed example to read: Charles Pigott is the author of The virtue of nature</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">7B7.2, immediately before examples at top of p. 126: suggest delete colon in "'References:' note." See usag</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">e without colon ("'References' note") on p. 119 in rule 7A1.3 and see my comments below for rule 7B18.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Changed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">7B9.3, 2nd example: "or" should be left justified so that "Signatures:" is indented at the same indention as the 1st example.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Fixe</FONT><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">d</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">7B9.7, last example: for "(in Hebrew chracters)" read "(in Hebrew characters)"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Fixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">7B18. "With:" notes. I agree with Ryan's comment, "Page 139, 7B19.3.4 gives the instruction, 'Preface the note with the words "Bound with" followed by a colo</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">n,' while in 7B18 the colon for 'With:' notes is indicated only implicitly. Should the instructions be harmonized? I prefer for both intellectual and typographical clarity the instruction given in 7B19.3.4." I too suggest that rule 7B18 make explicit the</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">instruction to begin the note with the word "With" followed by a colon. "'With:' notes" is the phrase used as the caption of DCRB 7C19, but the "Bound with" instance in</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM(B) 7B19.3.4 seems clearer to me and is supported by similar instruction</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">s to begin notes with "Signatures" (7B9.1) and "References" (7B14.1) and a colon. AACR2 2.7B21 uses the caption "'With' notes." If the editors agree, then the caption of 7B18 would read "'With' notes" and the first sentence of 7B18.1 could end "make a n</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">o</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">te beginning with the word 'With' followed by a colon." Such wording would take care of the problem Ryan noted about the final punctuation of the sentence ending with "With:"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Agree</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> changed.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">7B19.1c: </FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">should "'bound with' notes" be "'Bound with' notes"?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Yes</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> fixed.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">I hope these comments are helpful.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yes oh yes.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Windy</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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M. Winslow Lundy<BR>
Assistant Professor<BR>
Head of Monographic Cataloging<BR>
Cataloging & Metadata Services De</FONT><FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">partment<BR>
University of Colorado at Boulder Libraries<BR>
184 UCB<BR>
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phone: 303-492-3918<BR>
fax: 303-492-0494<BR>
email:</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#000000" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">windy.lundy@colorado.edu</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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