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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Thanks, Joseph.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Good work! </FONT></SPAN><A NAME=""><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></A></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Deborah J. Leslie, M.A., M.L.S.<BR>
Chair, RBMS Bibliographic Standards Committee<BR>
<A HREF="http://www.folger.edu/bsc/index.html">http://www.folger.edu/bsc/index.html</A><BR>
</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Head of Cataloging, Folger Shakespeare Library<BR>
</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">201 East Capitol St., S.E.,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Washington,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">D.C.</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">20003</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">djleslie@folger.edu || 202.675-0369 ||</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN><A HREF="http://www.folger.edu"><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><U></U></SPAN><U><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></U><U><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS">http://www.folger.edu</FONT></SPAN></U><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></A><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE=2 FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">-----Original Message-----<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">From:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu [<A HREF="mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu">mailto:dcrm-l-bounces@lib.byu.edu</A>]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">On Behalf Of</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Joseph Ripp<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Sent:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">23 September 2006</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">18:17<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">To:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM Revision Group List</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM Revision Group List<BR>
</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Subject:</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> [</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM-L] Area 5 comments</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Area 5 comments:</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Submitted: J. Ripp</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">September 23, 2006</FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> jripp@lib.siu.edu <</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><A HREF="mailto:jripp@lib.siu.edu"><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><U></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><U><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">mailto:jripp@lib.siu.edu</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></A><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">> </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> 1.618.453.3269</FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Original text in black, comments in blue.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">] we lost your</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">color scheme somewhere along the way, but I</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">don</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">t</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">thi</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">n</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">k</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">there is any</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ambiguity.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.93</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5A1. Prescribed punctuation" Should be boldface? [noted by David]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> done</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5A2. Sources of information" Should be boldface? [noted by David]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> done</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5B1. General" Should read "General rule" as at 5B15, 5C1 and as typically throughout the document</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">You are probably right. Changed.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.96</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5B5.1 "are included in the same pagination sequence as the text</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"or are printed on the pages of an initial or final gathering also containing</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"leaves or pages of text</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> "or are printed on a separate gathering in a publi</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">cation that is continuously signed."</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> I have two questions about the formatting of this rule. First, should "leaves or pages of text</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">" and "signed" be tabulated in to appear flush with the preceding lines of text, or are they meant to align with the word</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> "or?" It will be easier to convey my meaning visually. I wonder if what follows is what the editors desire</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">:</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"> Fixed. The main part of the text for all three conditions should align, with the two “or</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">s” flush left.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> "are i</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ncluded in the same pagination sequence as the text</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> "or are printed on the pages of an initial or final gathering also containing</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">leaves or pages of text</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"or are printed on a separate gathering in a publication that is continuously</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">signed."</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">And the second question is whether these options should be set off with letters a), b), and c</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">)?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"> I</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">ll consider this as part of the more comp</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">rehensive query submitted by</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">David Woodruff</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">For both queries, I cite the formatting of 1E8 as an analog if not as a precise equivalence. I did not find many other instances of such "or" statements by scanning the .pdf document, so I am unsure</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> of the editors' intentions. (Probably the area 7 people have already brought this to your attention, but the formatting also differs at 7B9.3 where "or" is indented from the left margin by one <tab>).</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> P.97</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5B6.1 "If the numbering within a sequence ch</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">anges ..."</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Suggestion to insert "style of" after "If?" to read:</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> "If the style of numbering within a sequence changes ..."</FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Your suggest</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ion is sound. This follows the wording of AACR2, and Intro 3.2.5 has this to say:</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#333399" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#333399" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM text is modeled on AACR2 text (substituting examples drawn from rare materials for illustration). In cases where the language of AACR2 is not precise enough t</FONT><FONT COLOR="#333399" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">o convey necessary distinctions or may introduce confusion when dealing with rare materials,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#333399" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM uses carefully considered alternative wording. Wording of relevant ISBD(A) standards was also considered when deviating from AACR2.)</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">I would argue</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">that the AACR2 wording</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">If the numbering within a sequence changes</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> is not precise enough and could lead to ambiguity, because it is only referring to cases when the sequence is continuous but the style changes, not to cases when the numbering itself chang</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">es. I propose changing it as Joseph suggests. Comments?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.98</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5B6.6 [alternative options marked a), b), and c)]</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">This formatting is attractive and logical, but once again, should be compared to 0C2 and 1E8 to confirm editors' intentions. Also, should i</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">nclude "or" between options?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">To be considered as part of larger issue.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.105</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5.C. Illustration</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Is singular "illustration" intentional, or is plural "illustration</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s" intended</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"> I presume it</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">s intentional. DCRB uses this wording, although AACR2 does not, nor does ISBD(A). I like it in the singular because of its suggestion that the presence of illustration is a condition to be recorded, rather than countable ite</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ms which could be confused with what needs to go in 300$a.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5C1.1 "To indicate presence of illustration use the abbreviation ..."</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Is singular "illustration intended, or is plural "illustrations" intended? </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5.C1.2 "Optionally, ..." </FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Should be italicized [already noted by Arvid</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Fixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#0000FF" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.106</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5C2.1 "Optionally, ..." Should be italicized [already noted by Arvid]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Fixed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5C2.2 and 5C2.3 It seems that these two rules will be followed only if the optional 5C2.1 is followed. They might consequently be viewed as subrules to 5C2.1. But as the rules now read, it could be assumed that 5C2.2 and</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">C2.3 are independent rules, mandated in all cases. But where 5C2.2 can potentially stand independently as a mandated rule, 5C2.3 only really makes sense if the optional 5C2.1 is followed. [5C5 seems to indicate that 5C2.2 is mandated in all cases - is th</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">i</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s in fact the intended meaning? See also note to 5C5 on p.107 below.]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Good catch. I agree that 5C2.2 and 5C2.3 are logical subrules to 5C2.1. I am reluctant to chance them, however, since we only went to five places in rule numbering when our backs</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">were against the wall. Let me check with the editors, though</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5C generally This issue is not significant, but I thought to mention it for the sake of thoroughness. It involves the use of abbreviations. 5C1.1 di</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ctates that the cataloger "use the abbreviation 'ill.'" and 5C3 dictates that the cataloger "describe color illustrations as such using the abbreviation 'col.'" The value of simply telling the cataloger to use "ill." or "col." rather than expecting that</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">he will find these abbreviations in AACR2 is apparent, but this does result in a minor inconsistency. The optional rule 5C2.1 regarding the specification of "particular types of illustrations," meanwhile, refers the cataloger to the list of "abbreviation</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> appearing in AACR2, Appendix B" when abbreviating facsims., geneal. tables, ports., etc. A brief search through the entire document reveals this as one of only two references to Appendix 2 (the other is 4B4). Would it be simpler to incorporate these ab</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">b</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">reviations into the text of</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DCRM(B)?</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western"> I don</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">t see a problem with</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">doing</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">this, and you</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">re right that it would be easier, given that there are a finite number of abbreviations under consideration. The two ways of doing this that occur to me are. I</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">have a slight preference for the first, even though we don</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">’</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">t abbreviate elsewhere in rule text. Any other suggestions more than welcome, both about whether we should do this, and how to make it more elegant.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> </SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">5C2.1.</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><I> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">Optionally</FONT></I></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">, specify particular types of illustrations. Use in alphabetical order one or more such terms as the following: coats of arms, diagrams, facsims., forms, geneal. tables, maps, music, plans, ports. (use for single or group portraits), samples. </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">Or</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">5C2.1.</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><I> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">Optionally</FONT></I></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Palatino Linotype">, specify particular types of illustrations. Use in alphabetical order the abbreviations authorized from AACR2 Appendix B (given in parentheses), if any, for one or more such terms as the following: coats of arms, diagrams, facsimiles (facsims.), forms, genealogical tables (geneal. tables), maps, music, plans, portraits (ports.) use for single or group portraits), samples. </FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.107</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5C5 "When the illustrations are all or chiefly of one type (see 5C2.2), use the name of the type instead of</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">'ill.'"</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Does this indicate that 5C2.2 is not to be considered optional? Or if 5C2.2 is optional, then this provision should also be considered optional. </FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL]</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yep, it should.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> I added</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Optionally</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> to the beginning of the second sentence. I also noticed, while I wa</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s at it,</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">that the first sentence</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">, carried</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">o</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">v</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">er from DCRB,</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> was awkward</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">/misleading</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> by</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">suggesting that we account</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">for the illustrations</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">rather than</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">account for the condition</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">of</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">the</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">volume</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">as</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">all or chiefly illustrated</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">.</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Original</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">:</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">If a publication consists entirely or chiefly of illustrations, account for</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">them with</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">“all ill.” or “chiefly ill.”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype"> W</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">hen the illustrations are all or chiefly of one type (see 5C2.2), use the name of the type instead of “ill.”</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">C</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">hanged</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">to</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">:</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">If a publication consists entirely or chiefly of illustrations, account</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">for this fact by specifying</FONT></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype"> “all ill.” or “chiefly ill.”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I> <FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">Optionally</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Palatino Linotype">, when the illustrations are all or chiefly of one type (see 5C2.2), use the name of the type instead of “ill.”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">P.108</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5D1. Height and format" </FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Is reiteration of "5D. Size and format" intended, or should this read "General rule" as at 5B15, 5C1 and elsewhere throughout the document?</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yes,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">I believe so; changed</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5D2"</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Elsewhere in</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> area 5, rules at this hierarchical level are subtitled and set off with line breaks from the text of the rule (Cf. "5B4 Errata leaves", "5B10 Folded leaves," "5B11. Double leaves," "5B12. Incomplete publications," "5B13. Sheets, rolls, cases, portfolios</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">,</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> etc.," "5B16. "Bibliographic volumes vs. physical volumes," "5B18. Pagination not continuous," "5B19. Leaves and pages of plates," "5C4. Number of illustrations," and "5C5. Publications consisting entirely or chiefly of illustrations," rules that are si</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">m</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ilarly unsubdivided, but are still subtitled and set off with line breaks from the text of the rule. [See also 5D3 and 5E2 below].</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">]</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Yes, not just</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">in Area 5 but throughout the document.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Changed captions</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5D2.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Width</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5D3. Differing sizes</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5E2.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Issued in pocke</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">t</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"5D3" </FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">Elsewhere in area 5, rules at this hierarchical lev</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">el are subtitled and set off with line breaks from the text of the rule (Cf. "5B4 Errata leaves", "5B10 Folded leaves," "5B11. Double leaves," "5B12. Incomplete publications," "5B13. Sheets, rolls, cases, portfolios, etc.," "5B16. "Bibliographic volumes</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">v</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">s. physical volumes," "5B18. Pagination not continuous," "5B19. Leaves and pages of plates," "5C4. Number of illustrations," and "5C5. Publications consisting entirely or chiefly of illustrations," rules that are similarly unsubdivided, but are still sub</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">t</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">itled and set off with line breaks from the text of the rule. [See also 5D2 above and 5E2 below].</FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> Elsewhere in area 5 (Cf. 5B5.1, 5B7.2, 5.B18),</FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">in such optional statements beginning "or ...", there appears to be a <tab></FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">stroke (9mm) following the word "or ," whereas here the text follows the word "or" without the insertion of a <tab>. Does the following formatting better reflect the editor's inte</FONT><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">ntions:</FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"></FONT> <FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS">"or describe the accompanying ..."</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> </FONT></SPAN></P>
<P ALIGN=LEFT><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">[</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><B><I><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">DJL</FONT></I></B></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">] Refo</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">rmatted</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">5E1.2 so that each</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">“</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">or</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS Western">”</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> is in italics and</FONT><FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS"> stands flush left</FONT> <FONT COLOR="#800080" FACE="Arial Unicode MS">followed by a tab.</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG="en-us"></SPAN></P>
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