[DCRM-L] Appendix D comments

[Deborah J. Leslie]

Good suggestion, Eileen. Made the change. 

 

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Subject: [DCRM-L] Appendix D comments

 

Just one little suggestion to add to the others:

D1: in the second paragraph, insert a period after "... to such needs"
and begin a new sentence with "Their purpose is not to promote ..."
(The occasional short sentence can provide a nice break in the midst of
complexity :-) )

Thanks again to the editors.
Eileen



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