[DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

[Deborah J. Leslie]

Yes, I think we're getting to the nub. The only change I might suggest
is to replace "not covered by" with "not included in." Viz., 7A1.1.
Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, and are especially
important for recording types of information not included in areas 1
through 6.

 

From: dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu [mailto:dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu] On
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Ahaaaaa... now I think I'm getting it (after talking with Deborah
off-line about this). Notes are especially important for recording
information for which no provision is made elsewhere. It's not that the
rules exclude the information from the other areas, it's that some types
of information have no corresponding ISBD area. There is provision for
recording a lengthy title in Area 1, so although you could also abridge
it in area 1 and put the whole thing in a note, notes aren't especially
important for recording title information. There is no "attributions"
area, or "bibliographic history" area, though, for example, so the note
area is especially important for that type of information. 

New proposed revision:

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, and are
especially important for recording types of information not covered by
areas 1 through 6.

Thanks,

     EB.

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From: dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu [mailto:dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu] On
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Sent: Monday, May 23, 2011 2:23 PM
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The original text is really quite clumsy, but the problem with the
proposed revisions is that it sounds like rules are doing the excluding.
They are not; catalogers are doing the excluding on the basis of the
rules. Is something like this better?   

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, and . They are
especially appropriate for recording information not provided for in
that rules exclude from other areas of the description.

 

That is (in case the bold and strikeout gets stripped)

 

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, and are
especially appropriate for recording information not provided for in
other areas of the description.

 

 

From: dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu [mailto:dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu] On
Behalf Of Karen Meyer-Roux
Sent: Monday, 23 May, 2011 12:25
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Subject: Re: [DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

 

I find Manon's sentences to be the clearest.  Shouldn't the "may" be
omitted though, to keep in line with the more direct meaning of the
original sentence Erin was working on, so as to have the following:  

 

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description. They are
especially appropriate for recording information that rules exclude from
other areas of the description.

Karen

>>> Manon Theroux <manon.theroux at gmail.com> 5/21/2011 9:55 AM >>>
The DCRM(B) sentence is a carryover from DCRB. I never found it
confusing. But, I guess some do? Responding to Lenore's suggested
wording:

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