[DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

[Erin Blake]

It's been a while since the last Discussion of a Proposed Change to DCRM
came along, so I hope I remember how to do it. This isn't a big-deal
proposal, just a change to clarify a confusing sentence. 

 

Current text: 

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
the rules for such description do not allow certain information to be
included in the other areas.

 

Proposed revision:

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
the rules for other areas exclude certain information.

 

Any objections? Improvements?

 

Thanks,

 

   EB.

 

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Erin C. Blake, Ph.D.  |  Curator of Art & Special Collections  |  Folger
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