[DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

[Joe A Springer]

Lenore's version looks like a good one.
Joe

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From: "Helena Zinkham" <hzin at loc.gov>
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Sent: Saturday, May 21, 2011 9:22:29 AM
Subject: Re: [DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

Thank you, Lenore!  Better words for where I was heading.  -- Helena 

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From: dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu [dcrm-l-bounces at lib.byu.edu] On Behalf Of Lenore Rouse [rouse at cua.edu]
Sent: Saturday, May 21, 2011 9:48 AM
To: DCRM Revision Group List
Subject: Re: [DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

  Erin that's a HUGE improvement I think. I fiddled with it a bit more
but someone might provide another formulation better balancing
clarity/brevity. Here's my attempt:

7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, and are
especially appropriate for recording that information which the
rules may exclude from other areas.


Lenore

On 5/21/2011 12:34 AM, Erin Blake wrote:
> It's been a while since the last Discussion of a Proposed Change to DCRM
> came along, so I hope I remember how to do it. This isn't a big-deal
> proposal, just a change to clarify a confusing sentence.
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> Current text:
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> 7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
> the rules for such description do not allow certain information to be
> included in the other areas.
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> Proposed revision:
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> 7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
> the rules for other areas exclude certain information.
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> Any objections? Improvements?
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> Thanks,
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>     EB.
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