[DCRM-L] DPC: minor wording change to 7A1.1 for clarity

[Laurence S. Creider]

I don't see the confusion here.  Could someone please point it out to me? 
The sentence is awkward, but our task will never be finished if we start
changing the rules on the basis of style. Of the re-phrasings through
Manon's, I prefer the first and shortest the best.

Larry

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Laurence S. Creider
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On Fri, May 20, 2011 10:34 pm, Erin Blake wrote:
> It's been a while since the last Discussion of a Proposed Change to DCRM
> came along, so I hope I remember how to do it. This isn't a big-deal
> proposal, just a change to clarify a confusing sentence.
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> Current text:
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> 7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
> the rules for such description do not allow certain information to be
> included in the other areas.
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> Proposed revision:
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> 7A1.1. Notes qualify and amplify the formal description, especially when
> the rules for other areas exclude certain information.
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> Any objections? Improvements?
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> Thanks,
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>    EB.
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