[DCRM-L] Appendix D comments

[Eileen Smith]

Just one little suggestion to add to the others:

D1: in the second paragraph, insert a period after "... to such 
needs" and begin a new sentence with "Their purpose is not to promote ..."
(The occasional short sentence can provide a nice break in the midst 
of complexity :-) )

Thanks again to the editors.
Eileen

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Rare Book Team, SML
Yale University Library
P.O. Box 208240,   New Haven, CT  06520-8240
Telephone: 203-432-8383 ; Fax: 203-432-7231
Email: e.smith at yale.edu
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