[DCRM-L] Area 4 comments

[Deanna Chavez]

Pg. 83, 4D1.1.    Delete the space between the first period and the
second 1
 
Pg. 85, 4D2.5.    Last line -- the 12 referring to the footnote should
be superscripted
 
Pg. 86, 4D2.5.    First example under the last paragraph -- should this
be 12/13 September 1750?
 
Pg. 88, 4D5.       Font sizes in the left column are not consistent
 
 
 
Some suggestions about comma placement:
 
Pg. 69, 4A1.       For consistency with the other paragraphs, I would
put a comma between "colon" and "unless" in the 4th and 8th paragraphs
 
Pg. 71,               5th line, comma between "importance" and "while?"
footnote 11
 
Pg. 77, 4B10.2.   2nd line, commas after "Leningrad" and St.
Petersburg?"  
 
 
Other than these few things, the section looks good, with much fuller
explanation of the rules.
 
 
Deanna Chavez
Special Collections Cataloger
The Library of Virginia
800 East Broad Street
Richmond, Virginia 23219-8000
(804) 692-3631
dchavez at lva.lib.va.us
 
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